PP,
You're getting bent out of shape for nothing! In your original post you said
Let me know what you all think!
I can't speak for the others who have commented, but I only chimed in on your little project because, after watching your vid, I thought you had the physical potential to actually vault well. I still believe that, but I'm losing faith in your mentality. You seem like a very intelligent kid, but it doesn't take a rocket scientist to jump high.
Working in the public school system as well as owning my own training facility, I've had the opportunity to coach kids from both ends of the spectrum when it comes to intelligence. There has always been one constant though........the ones who are willing to listen and translate what's being taught to them to actually physically performing it are the ones who have had success. Don't get me wrong. I have had some kids who have been extreme students of the vault and questioned everything. That has made me a better coach in the process since I have to come up with some answers. I've also had some kids that couldn't even spell pole vault, but try whatever I told them, would grip anywhere I told them and would run from where I told them on any pole I put in their hands. These kids still jumped 15+ and 16+.
I encourage my kids and fellow coaches to buy BTB. It's a great resource for any vault enthusiast, but some common sense must be used in order to transfer the information from paper to runway.
Everytime I see a kid jump for the first time, I may see several flaws that need repair. The worst thing I can do for them is point out all of those flaws and expect them to absorb it. I will point out the most important immediate flaw to repair and work on that one thing until it's satisfactory or at least close to satisfactory. Obviously, I have a lot more time and less pressure when it comes to the kids at my high school, but with the kids that travel from hours away for a 2 hour session, sometimes it's a "one-shot" deal. Parents aren't willing to haul their kids to a vault session that takes up their entire day if they don't see obvious, immediate results.
My point is that I think you are trying to work on too many things at one time. It's only hard to jump high, PP, if you're short and fat or extremely hard headed. From the looks of your videos, you're not short and fat. Even though you have the most annoying attitude I've ever seen, I want you to jump high (whatever that means for you) and I think everyone who has posted on your training blog wants the same.
You will never get an elongated, detailed explaination from me (this is probably the longest post I've ever written) when it comes to advice on the vault. I stick to my first things first approach. If I use sarcasm with you or come up with weird analogies, it means that I think you're capable of much more. That's just the way I do things.
Good luck!