Hi Pool Man:
Doing some good stuff on your vault. A little tough to see, but it looks like your takeoff is pretty solid. Your top hand never passes beyond vertical, which is really good.
Your primary problem is that you are looking at the bar way too long and are not continuing to swing up on the pole. As your hips pass horizontal, you need to engage shoulder muscles and drop your shoulders to line up, and come around the front of the pole. You are always past the pole, so your natural tendency is to flag out at the top. Look at this link
http://www.elitepolevaulttools.com/Pages/pulleypole.htm
The athlete in the bottom two videos is continuing to use her shoulders to get to the pole. Notice that her backside is beginning to show, which means that she is already naturally starting to rotate around the pole. Look at this link:
http://www.elitepolevaulttools.com/Page ... akeoff.htm.
This athlete is learning how to rotate around the pole and stay vertical.
There are other links that will give you the same idea what I am talking about.
Good luck
LPVG