Regions Meet, please critique

[bushy_12]

Here is a video from the recent region meet.
I just got on the 14' 160lb UCS pole.
I weigh around 143lb and am 5'8" tall.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5XgjDUvofRM

Any critique would be helpful.
One thing I noticed is that my trail leg is not straight but curled in.

[Pacer13]

One thing i notice besides the poor trail leg is your strides are short, that's something to work on. Also i've had trouble penetrating the pit before, for me it coincided with my drive leg, also check to make sure your not taking off inside of your normal take off point which could happen if you switched to a longer pole without also moving your steps. Good Luck